Monday, May 18, 2009
038 writing class one different thing between canada and china
Now,I am living Canada. I feel there transportation are so different from china's. In canada, most of canadian have own car, and they always drive car go out to do something. I always watch many car and buses in the street, and didn't see other transportation in the street.But in china, I think there have many transportation in the street.Different people use their transportation to do something. Likes bicycle, motcrcycle, cars and trolleys. So that's so different thing than china's.
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Julia
ReplyDeleteYou explain the transportation differences very well. I have a few comments on your composition:
I feel the transportation system here is so different. You are in Canada - so you are here.
I always see cars - not watch cars.
much transportation - not many - its "uncountable"
Join your examples of transportation "like motorcycles, bicycles " to the sentence before - make them one sentence.
Bruce.