Tuesday, May 26, 2009
038 writing class my favourite food
In this world, different countrys people have their favourite food. I have favourite food too, that is sweet rice soup. I ate this soup about fourteen years old. I very like eat this soup. This soup made with wine and rice together. The taste is so sweet. I very like it. In china, every summer, my mother likes make this one to gave me to eat. I'm so happy. Now, I living in Kamloops. Sometimes I came back to Vancouver, I like bought some sweet rice soup with my aunt, because this soup is my aunt favourite food too. We always bought this soup go home to eat. This is my favourite food.
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Hi Julia
ReplyDeleteI hope you are doing fine. I read your pargraphe, and I faound yor Topic it was clear. Then I couldn't finnd the controlling idea also the conclusion.Next, you were in the topic.
have a good night
Hi Julia ....
ReplyDeleteyou paragraph is very well, and I enjoy reading your sentences about sweet rice soup. I have one comment if you don`t mind
I think you can`t say" I very like " but you can say" I really like"
thank you
have a good one