- I went to Vancouver by bus to see my aunt.---- Simple
- We went to superstore to buy some fruit, and I went to library to borrow some story books.----Compound
- After we take a bus in nine o'clock, my little cousin and I decided to go to the beach.----Complex
- I went to Vancouver by bus to saw my aunt.----Independent Clause
- We went to superstore to buy some fruit------Simple sentence
- and I went to library to borrow some story books.----Compound sentence
- After we take a bus in nine o'clock-------Dependent Clause
- my little cousin and I decided to go to the beach.-----Simple sentence
3. Paragraph:
In April, when I finished my final exam. I went to Vancouver by bus to see my aunt. In there, I was so happy, because I found some things in there. Every morning, I like running and playing badminton with my little cousin. After we take a bus in nine o'clock, my little cousin and I decided to go to the beach. On April 24th, my aunt gave me my favourite book, that name is " twilight", I loved it very much. On April 28th, it's my uncle's birthday. We were sing a song, dancing and giving a wishes for he. We ate one deciduous cheese cake after another until we were tired. We were played almost five hours had finished since we came back to home. On April 30th, we went to airport to pick up my cousin, we were waiting at the airport when he arrived. And then, we went to superstore to buy some fruit, and I went to library to borrow some story books. Finally, before I came back to kamloops they drove me to bus station. These things are happened in my life for this April.
Thank you.
Wow good holiday Julia.
ReplyDeleteIt is good that you saw your cousin
well, that's so exaiting.
ReplyDeleteI hope you had a good time there.
Julia, you have some mistaiks on your paragraph. I want to tell you that to fix it soon,
first, number 1 says.'' I went to vanvouver by bus'', you forgot A, so by a bus.
and other things on your paragraph.
However, I liked your blog and good luck on it
Julia
ReplyDeleteThis is a good, long paragraph.
comments:
write all your verbs in the past tense: we were singing, we took, it was - most of your verbs were past tense - but not all
"In there" - you don't need in
I came back to kamloops, they drove me- you need a comma
end - these things happened
Dear Julia hi
ReplyDeleteI hope you are doing fine. It nice to read your writing it is really intersting.
warm greeting
hi JULIA
ReplyDeleteI think it was great trip
also i hope to read the twilight book .